Sunday, October 30, 2005

Love tunes

In your thought, my love

I hold on tight---
wrapped around
the dusky images
of your malevolent looks
beneath the electric signals
of my blurred vision

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My torrid
dreams
like warm monsoon
sorties--
wander in search
of your placid
images


And I found you
like the sea breeze
finds the mountain
Then,
there was a storm.


4 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Me back!!! Theres always a storm...

9:55 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

'And I found you
like the sea breeze
finds the mountain
Then,
there was a storm.'

...this was really nice, strange yet tender...but in the ones before the imagery was somehow a bit too jarring for me...

7:17 AM  
Blogger Jai said...

Anil: useage of malevolent here might sound a bit harsh, but here it is used more like in a wild-passionate-killer sense
Nish: i am really glad to have you here.

3:43 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Ooo, impressive stuff. Maybe getting that haircut works wonders for ye brain, er...i mean your poetry is fabulous! *claps*

9:28 PM  

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